• EtherWhack@lemmy.world
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      7 months ago

      Not sure why the downvotes when it could definitely use use better punctuation. A semicolon or an em dash could definitely help with the flow without looking like a hyperactive 14y/o wrote it.

      This would be a bit more understandable

      When you; didn’t take, accidentally took, innocently used, declassified and then took, took and then declassified; the documents that you never took and were illicitly planted in your house by the FBI–all simultaneously.